Dj Rella's Review
Daft Punk's "Aerodynamik is a relly hard song to remix.
This one wasn't all that melodic (but I saw from the below comment that this was a "test") And even as such, it's not that great at all...
I give an "E" for effort, however if you don't make anything that's really worth sharing, then don't upload it...
If you want opinions on your "Tests" upload them to Youtube or something, work on them more until they sound halfway decent, or show it to your friends/family to get some opinions.
Morethan anything on this, the Guitar riff and your "Melody" don't match in Tempo at all. You need to have them sync.
I'd also work on whatever synths you were using.